So. First of all, I see sooo much improvement since when I started watching you. Your colouring has gotten a lot neater, for one thing. I found that it used to be a tad messy, but now like WOW it looks really great. I like how the colours are paler, it fits your style of drawing. Her hair looks nice too, all those colours uvu
My suggestion to you is that you should deepen your shading more. Like, her hair behind her head and under the hat, and some shadows on the shirt under the scarf, ya know?
And one more thing, there's a little bit of white between Berriy's legs you didn't make transparent. And that's it~!