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Hnnnnnn thanks so much Savi-Chan!! //btw I sent your letter ; w ; // 
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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Why sparkle berriy though?
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So. First of all, I see sooo much improvement since when I started watching you. Your colouring has gotten a lot neater, for one thing. I found that it used to be a tad messy, but now like WOW it looks really great. I like how the colours are paler, it fits your style of drawing. Her hair looks nice too, all those colours uvu
My suggestion to you is that you should deepen your shading more. Like, her hair behind her head and under the hat, and some shadows on the shirt under the scarf, ya know?
And one more thing, there's a little bit of white between Berriy's legs you didn't make transparent. And that's it~!
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